MLP ODDWORLD STRANGERS WRATH CODE

for future emotional momentary to visualize and insist like your there and describe the how the moment plays out and if you think to your self 'hey he is a battle hardened dragon he might not even feel pinkie around his neck and it's odd that this much larger dragon isn't worried about how fragile they are and how broken he is to finally see them again' or along the lines like your there and to few Freeze the scene in your mind andsay. perhaps just less humor in general if your next stories or maybe just try to or.

THAT moment was what u were advertising the whole novel and the dry humor was just out of place and just took away from that I think. it was a huge negative to subtract from the moment. I think the dry humor was out of place and you could have just let the moment percolate for a while, perhaps you could have I don't know you could have had like a time to them like forward in time back in the library and they could be cuddling with him or sitting in a Circle or just something where they don't like. So almost immediately why did you think it was necessary to take away from the emotional reunion. Or if you are changing topic, of one person reacting to Spike’s ‘death’ to another. Try every five or six sentences to change. Everyone was wondering where she had gotten the album but after everyone was ready for leave Celestia made a speech.”īreak this up.

MLP ODDWORLD STRANGERS WRATH CODE

I place your last power ponies comic you ever bought in, Rarity put in the first dress you helped her design, Applejack placed that Dragons code card you made when you owed her a life debt, Rainbow place her favorite daring do book in, as for Fluttershy she put in her the tea set you two always used when you would go visit her, Pinky made a bakers dozen of the sapphire cupcakes you loved after I added a spell so they would not spoil, Starlight added a photo of when she was first reformed and you became her first friend, Disocrd and Big Mac added their Ogres and Oubliettes charater sheets along with yours, Cadence and Shining ordered a new statue in your honor, but Flurry Heart added in her wammy when no one was looking, Princess Luna added a gem version of your dream door crest, Ember placed a large ruby cut in the shape of the Bloodstone septer to rember her first friend, Thorax had the young changelings make a small clay statue of you for him and his hive, and lastly Princess Celestia added two very impotant thing, the first was the very first scroll you sent her and lastly was a album of your baby photos. Luna had to explain to everyone that this was because she was under the weather to keep up her façade of royalty, but we knew what was the real problem, The next day was your funeral, and everyone traveled to the Empire for the service, that day even if the sun was up, it could not be seen as it was ordered that their was to be a heavy down pour till the servis was over, as we were about to say our last goodbyes to you we all decided to put something that reminded us of you in your coffin as we not have your body. Us seven, Celestia and Luna, Thorax, Ember, and everyone in the crystal empire were devastated, but not as much as Celestia, when you first disappeared the sun seemed less bright, but as time went on it only seemed to get darker, until that day when you where declared dead, that day the sun did not rise at all, Celestia was so grief-stricken that she was unable to move the sun. Sadly, after another month it was decided to end the search and you were legally considered dead. “Their fine Spike, but when you first disappeared in to the portal, everyone was so worried, so much so Celestia ordered the entirety of the royal forces to search for you, Luna spent days looking for you in the dream realm, Cadence and Shining Armor spent weeks searching the frozen north, dragon lord Ember, and king Thorax sent large numbers of their troops to search the rest of the world, where ponies could not go, but after two months of searching we started to lose hope of finding you but Celestia and Luna, and us seven continued to search for you.

Mlp oddworld strangers wrath